Evaluation of Rough Cut

Holiday work - Task 2 - SWOT

Holiday work - Task 1 AUDIT

Evaluating the rough cut

Evaluation the Rough Cut

Strengths and Weaknesses of my blog

This is my analysis of the weaknesses and strengths of my blog.

Evidence AUDIT

From my evidence audit its clear that I need to post more blog posts on shot-lists, layouts, drafting etc. From now I will try to maintain a balance of blog posts

Evaluation of rough cut

SMART Targets

Based on the SWOT analysis and the AUDIT table I have set myself SMART targets in order to develop my media skills:

SWOT Analysis

AUDIT Table

My SMART Targets

I made these smart targets based on my audit, and my blogging Health Check

Holiday Work - Task 2: SWOT

These are my SWOT Tasks based on how I feel my coursework is going, and how the blog is generally going.

Holiday Work - Task 1: Audit

This is my Audit Table for the Holiday Work. 

I have based this from work throughout the Unit, and compared my blogging health checks too

Blogging Healthcheck Number 3

Editing of Rough Cut - Lola, Ellie, Natalya, Niamh

A camtasia of our editing.

Rough Cut - Lola, Ellie, Natalya, Niamh

This is our Rough Cut for the Mock Week

Proof of Editing - Niamh

This is us editing some of our shots, and deciding which shot looked best

Evidence of us Working - Natalya

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voiceover speech

To add some sound into our title sequence we will be doing some voiceover speech.

The first shot to include it is when the phone falls on the floor and when picked up the screen is shattered. Prada will say "oh my god, my phone!"

The next shot to include voiceover is when the three girls are walking to the shop, the will be some general conversation about the phone or something. 

Final decisions , editing - Lola

Due to changes not being able to film in an opticians we have decided to change the name from Like a star to Head in the clouds this is because the scene in the gift shop the main character is actually day dreaming which is why we have changed the name to fit the film. During filming we are going to edit so it looks like  she is day dreaming about the boy she has just met , then it cuts back at the end to the gift shop. We had a range of different names but we all felt that Head in the clouds best fit with the film. In today's lesson we are working on how to make the day dreaming scene look effective.

Plan of what we are going to do on the 10/12/15 - Natalya

By this lesson our rough cut will be complete and ready to note down further improvements that need to made. We may need to include small changes to perfect our piece, such as, editing the colours using 'Premier Pro' to make the production flow throughout.  Also we will appropriately add the sound affects and voice overs into our film.

Plan of what we are going to do on the 7/12/15 - Natalya

In this lesson we are going to continue editing our opening of the title sequence. This will help us have an overall look at any shots we need to remake/ film. We will put all the shots together and note down any improvements made during editing that may not follow the storyboard, in order to make the opening make sense to our target audience. We will also develop the previous script and sound affects and later record them, using the microphone.

Editing the Teen Drama - Niamh

Alex - Lola

This is Alex who we used as plan B, he goes to our college and did not have
lessons so agreed to helping us film. We used him for the romance scene which
went really well because he fits the whole typical teen drama stereotype. 

Otis - Lola

This is Otis who we originally planned to use as the boy for the romance scene.
Due to him having lessons our plan of using him did not work out , however
we did find a boy who was willing to film with us as he did not have any lessons. 

Today's Filming - Lola

This is Ellie and Alex on set today filming
the final scene for our film.

This is Ellie filming in Owens field outside the college.