On summary, the feedback given was that the pitch was in great detail and clear. The students explained the context was good; they liked the unique optician setting, however we still need to ring the optician to check if it's alright to film there. Two students' feedback which was positive was that they were instantly engaged by the way we targeted the audience and knew our target audience by using social apps like Facebook.
The improvements that were suggested, were to make the presentation on one big Prezi rather than on separate ones for each subject. Another improvement we could make is to plan a voice-over scrip in preparation for the production. Lastly, to find a copy right free version of the song 'Hollaback girl', which we were planning to use. This could be found on Soundcloud, where every music piece is copy right free. We forgot to include it in our pitch, but we found an actor who is willing to be in the film and we have coordinate time management with him.
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