Reflecting on the feedback from our class, and teacher, it is a relief to know that most people thought the initial idea of our film was good, and achievable, and we explained each idea relating to the film positively, and that we presented it with lots of detail, however one of the the main issues that came up was that we should project our voices more to seem more confident.
Another thing that we pride ourselves on is the amount of research we done as a group into our genre, and the conventions of the Teen Drama Genre, i.e.. music, outfits, locations, etc....
We could have improved our pitch by collating all of our ideas into one prezzi; which would have made it more organised and less embarrassing, and maybe keep our audience engaged.
One important point that was raised is that we will not allowed to use the original of Gwen Steffani's "Hollaback Girl" due to copyright issues. To solve this we will use a copy of "Hollaback Girl", from soundcloud/other music sharing forums. This might be one of the copies we use;
Another point that was raised was that we needed proof of permission to film at the N1 Centre, and the opticians. If the optician will not let us film, we have a back up of a gift shop - courtesy of Lola, and her family. If this does happen we will just have to tweak our storyboard slightly.
We also need proof that we had thought, and planned who the boy will be.
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